It would be like a locomotive with a mouth full of butcher knives.
My Table Of Contents
Chapter 1 Adrenalin Shot
Chapter 2 The Cause
Chapter 3 Kissing the Summer Goodbye
Chapter 4 Alex Kintner
Chapter 5 Ben Gardner
Chapter 6 In Paradise
Chapter 7 A Predator in the Neighbourhood
Chapter 8 Hooper's Open Fly
Chapter 9 Open or close the Beaches
Chapter 10 A Premium Job
Chapter 11 Thread of Tension
Chapter 12 The Locomotive with a mouth full of Butcher Knives
Chapter 13 Blind shot
Chapter 14 An Ejaculation of Hopelessness
The most important event is because
The man getting drunk. If his head didn't need to be cleared , the woman would have not suggested the swim and as a result the shark may have not been attracted to Amity.
The best chapter is because
Ben Gardner, a hero. He went on his lone to hunt the shark,killed defending his Island home.
The adventure would be better if
Quint and Hooper worked more positively together.
My favourite character is because
Mrs Kintner , for holding Brody to account for her son's death.
My worst character is
Brody because he didn't stand up to vested interests as he was talked out about his correct cause of death of the first victim.
Characters I would add
A Second Great White Shark.
Why didn't Quint allow Bill Whitman to go with them on the Orca ?
Rewrite the Start
I want everyone to always drink with moderation .If the women was drunk she would have fell asleep on the beach like the man and as a result would have not gone swimming and therefore would have not been attacked by the shark.
Rewrite the Middle
I would reduce down chapters 6 and 7 as there's some useful interesting information of the History of Amity and Hooper.
Brody didn't accidentally shoot Hooper, Hooper's cage was strong enough to hold back the shark and the Orca was well built. These would ensure the plan to bring the shark to justice.
Rewrite a key event
Brody stuck with the shark attack as a cause for the first victim , closed the beaches , kept them closed and saved Alex Kintner.