murder in midwinter

My title:
Murder in midwinter
My introduction:

This book is recommended by me it is suitable for 10-13 ages. I will explain a bit about the story before you scroll down through the review.  Maya goes to the mall and starts buying cloths for chrismas coming up she took her phone out to show her sister the an image of a sale sign on the mall. After she was taking the picture she scrolled through and found a women holding a gun to a man she got petrified and ran and got a bus. This is just the intro it gets more exiting. In real life when you are reading the book it will be even more exciting but for know just scroll down my review. Trust me this is one of the best books ever


Author’s Name:
Fleur Hitchcock
Categories: The best quote is:
My Table Of Contents
The most important event is because

The most important event is when Maya finds out the murderer is a women and she is coming after Maya for a painting that costs 20 million pounds 

The best chapter is because

The best chapter was chapter 22 because that the chapter that had the twist to the story and if anyone was a person who likes plenty of twists on a story is book is for them

The adventure would be better if

To be honest there is nothing to change about  the story because everything thing is perfect as it is and changes would rune the story.

My favourite character is because

My favorite character is Maya because she is the star of the story and makes correct decisions. Adding on, she had hard times to make friends and everything but at the end everything worked out for her and this made me like her even more.

My worst character is

The worst character is the villains girlfriend because it turned out the villain Peter Romero was on the good side and his girlfriend was on the bad side. I also hated her because she tried to kill a 12 year old boy and she lighted a barn on fire.

Characters I would add

Actually there is no character i would like to add I like the story as it is. 

If you could change a part of the story what would it me? (to the author)
Rewrite the Start

The introduction is when Maya goes to the mall and starts buying cloths for chrismas coming up she took her phone out to show her sister the an image of a sale sign on the mall. After she was taking the picture she scrolled through and found a women holding a gun to a man she got petrified and ran and got a bus. After she called the cops and told them what happened during the incident. When she was about to show them the pictures she found out the twins lost her sim card.

Rewrite the Middle

The middle bit of the story is when she found out her sister was captured and it was because of her, so the police told her to get away from her family and stay with her cousins. After she moved in with her cousin it was hard to make friends with him so she gave up and started talking to him the way he was talking to her. Later on the story, Maya found out Ollie her cousin was tried very hard to fix his bulldozer but never succeeded, she never wanted to help him because he was very mean to her. When time came she helped Ollie fix the bulldozer he was very impressed and started to be Maya's friend. 

Rewrite Ending

At the end Maya finds out the 20 million pounds painting was in her bag and Peter Romero put it there when she was sitting on a bench next to him and everyone from her family is coming to meet her,Ollie and her aunt V. After a few months everyone from her family including Ollie and Aunty V where coming to see the painting . Ollie and Maya was not able to see the painting before because the police officer took it away from them.Everyone where excited to see the painting that was smaller than a A4 size paper. 

Rewrite a key event

Ollie head appears .

It's a gun attached to it, and a hand, and i panic,and i dont drop the poker in time and then they are standing in the room and she is looking at me and i have blown it.

"Maya,"she says. "Where is it?"

"What?" I say

"It," she says

"What's she talking about?" says Ollie, his head at a really weird angle, a droplet of sweat already pooling on his chin.

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