Barry Loser

My title:
Barry Loser best school trip ever NOT
My introduction:

Barry Loser went to school knowing that he had a school trip he was excited until he actually went to the trip he thought it was really bad.

Author’s Name:
Jim Smith
Categories: The best quote is:
Believe in yourself
My Table Of Contents
The most important event is because

Why was his sure name LOSER

The best chapter is because

No chapters

The adventure would be better if

The was mor action

My favourite character is because

Barry because he Is hilarious 

My worst character is

Sharrelona

Characters I would add

Bird

Rewrite the Start
Rewrite the Middle
Rewrite Ending
Rewrite a key event

School trip

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