when Micheal [the main character] finds the person
The best chapter is because
chapter ten because of the a another character [from i am Mina] named Mina comes in the story to help Micheal's life problems
The adventure would be better if
the ending because it was rushed by Skellig flying into the skies and Micheal's little sister is healthy.
My favourite character is because
Skellig because he talks a lot about his pass
My worst character is
the dad because he just get him food and ask for help from Micheal
Characters I would add
a teacher to help him with his problem
how did Skellig got to the garage?
the reason why i ask this question because he was found there laying on the floor . Was he the owner of the house? did he get hit with something?the questions are limitless with this book
Rewrite the Start
it was a terrible day. I have just move out and went to Falcon.RD,but that wasn't why ,but that wasn't why i was having a terrible day. not even that. it was like a scary night.i went into the garage that day even though mom told me not to go. i thought i had seen something or a figment.
''MICHEAL YOU ARE NOT ALLOWED TO BE IN THERE !''
I RAN OUT AS QUICK AS POSSIBLE.
Rewrite the Middle
i look up there was a girl.on a tree.
''Climb up here''
and i did,what i needed new friends.
''I AM MINA AND YOU ARE MICHEAL NOW SHAKE ON ''
how did she mean by shake on it and how did she know my name.
''I have been watching you gotta go bye.''
That was quick.
His wings are opening his finger are straightening his legs as well
''I am skellig and in the return i will help you like you did to me.''
''will bring your father back and your sister will be okay.''responded skellig
''he left me 7 years ago he is not coming back''
''you will see''
'' she be alright ''
yes you will see good bye.
i still remember those day the baby is fine now she is a little sister.